Jumat, 06 Juni 2008

the swimmer

character in the story:
shierly adams is Neddy's former misterss. when neddy arrive at home, she weas surpprised with a young man. i don't like the cvharacter of the story because there is no character develove of the amin charecter

the story has setting in affluent suburb of wenchester country' in new york. truely i don't like the setting of the story because the seting did't not give something new. it just only the one direct place.

i think the story tel litle bit of the good mesege. so it can't give the true good story.

the style is metaphore. it tells about the conditon of the problem in home

the important event is when the house is fired becauser of thier own mistakes

2 komentar:

nopita mengatakan...

for me my self 1 think your analizing is bad analizing because you can't look for the point of the story,you just only a give setting of the place and you must write example moral message,you must learn analizing hard,in order to your analizing become good you must remember what describe about this story may be your analizing enough.

heni juniarti mengatakan...

i think the commant from nopita about her analyze is wrong because her dezcribe is good, she can analyze that story well and she had answer all questions about describe this story well and i understand...and in that question theren't question about moral massage...so i think hermayani analyze is good...